The moment she closes her eyes,
She sees him around her,
But the fact is,
That he is nowhere around her,
Or maybe there but in some another form,
He went away to another world,
Where she can never meet him.
She believes he is always around her,
It’s just she has to close her eyes to feel him.
And one day after fulfilling all the responsibilities,
And the promises she has done to him,
She will also close her eyes forever,
So that she can always see him,
And hence they both will be together again,
To complete their unending saga of ‘LOVE…………
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Wow! That was so emotional and touchy… it felt as if, I am actually witnessing all that is written!! Beautifully expressed Priyal
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Well this is amazing!
“To complete their unending saga of love.”
Truly said love is immortal. Beautiful post !
keep writing.
So pure and heartouching
The title of The post sums it up Priyal. They are always together bonded by their love
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and one day when they meet in another world. they will hold each other and be happy for eternity.
beautifully written
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Emotional. The title is self descriptive. I initially thought this is some inter galactic love story.
I liked that you added ‘And one day after fulfilling all the responsibilities’… she knows her time is not done yet and is waiting to complete her role here on earth…
It touched my heart, how beautifully have you written this. Loved it 🙂
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You have a penchant for poetry. True love is indeed eternal.
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Such an emotional story! I hope he would be there when she finally reaches that world
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And one day after fulfilling all the responsibilities, And the promises she has done to him, She will also close her eyes forever — these were my favourite lines. Beautiful poem.
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True love never dies .. the body does but the soul lives on
That’s true 🙂
This is beautiful, Priyal. Everything said and felt in such few words. Loved the last line of the poem. #MyFriendAlexa #LiveItYoungReads
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Good one. Liked it.
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Emotionally hitting… beautifully written Priyal.
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Really beautiful story line! Thanks for sharing.
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